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5/11/09

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2 Reviews | 1 w/ Response

Score: 3
Awesome-Life: 2nd Ramake

"...script?"

date: June 28, 2009

If you don't write scripts for your animations, I suggest you start. Your jokes are very bland and took too long to execute. (too much dialog in the joke)
If you actually do write scripts, work on your material :P
Don't distort or reverb your voice too much because I couldn't make out anything at the parts you did.
Also try running it at 24 fps, make all keyframes twice as long, and all the animations should be a lot smoother.

Other than that, good flash from someone as old as you sound.
Flash: 2
Good attempt: +1

December 24, 2009

Author's Response:

I DID write a script. Back then I sucked much worse at Flash, and now my stuff is at 30 FPS!

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Score: 5
My Half Life - #2

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submission: My Half Life - #2
date: June 21, 2009

Eh... you're on your way.
Try giving the graphics and the jokes a little more practice.

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